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Yet another Chibnall Script. UGH!

Recommendations of the Week, Planet of the Spiders and Green Death!



Someone is hiding something. Fired for what?



Doctor is still not himself and

still manages to get the 'passengers'€™ back to Sheffield.



Doctor might leave but decides to stay.



Yaz brings friends home . Junk all over the place and stinks.

Sounds like Chibnall season all right.



Yaz gets a call to help a friend



Graham goes home to an empty house with a cobweb.



Yaz and Ryan explores only to find cobwebs in a flat next to Yaz.



Anna , Yaz's neighbour is spider mummified. And a big spider is discovered.



Time for a repellent.



Jane MacIntyre is about to say spiders are getting big.



Big spider in a research area!!



Yaz is coming! Hotel?? I winder what is the real reason for this hotel.



Spider research - what is happening to the irregular spiders?

Hotel manager Jack Robinson is an idiot! Typical Chibnall characterisation.

A big spider comes his way. Nadia is Yaz's mum.



Personal guard is gone via big spider.



The doctor see the big Spider. Run!! And Spiders trap Doctor and friends .



Jack Robinson, a Donald Trump clone a la Chibnall.



Chibnall satire, sorry get Jon Culshaw!

The Doctor is in charge accordingly to its friends!!

Graham and Ryan tries to trap a spider and whoops

and here comes and army of arachnids.



Big arachnid, big mystery. Time to check to joint out including keep out zones.

Spider victims in the restricted zone. Landfill on top of a hotel!

Chibnall version of business!



Chibnall your writing and your politics just is outright terrible.

You must be disappointed that Hillary Clinton is not the US President

and Theresa May is a paper thin leader. May is not Thatcher!



JLR companies. Chibnall you are disaster of a writer.

You cannot satirise Donald Trump with accuracy.

Doctor overracts and blah time. Panic room / lockdown area.

Lure spiders by rock vibration, bad!!

Jack shoots the spider and he looks mad, thank you Chibnall!!

Graham sees a ghost back home.



Adventure over, and Graham, Ryan and Jaz wants to travel with the Doctor.

Lever on.



Mix Green Death and Planet of the Spiders and what a failure!! Whittaker is

definitely the wrong choice for lead and Chibnall is an abysmal disaster

as showrunner. Save Doctor Who.

Go back to Twice Upon a Time and correct the Regeneration scene,



0.5/10

The captain is complaining about evening to rescuing the Doctor and companions. Typical Chibnall, weak male characters. And the Doctor is not himself. Looking for The TARDIS. Messing ships up. BAD!



Tent Hologramme! Looks like everything is all over the place. No consistency. The Doctor is promising to keep everyone alive. TheTARDIS is on the planet but an a space-time anomoly is occurring.



The chase is on on a planet without logic? Wrecked ships. Cowardly Captain. Crazy Planet. Stepgranddad and stepgrandson not looking all the greatest.



The planet certain does not make sense Doctor. Set sail! Everyone is debating. Same old mistrust. Cigar smoking man! Move on Chibnall!



Building without people. Sun setting quickly and killer robots are coming out of nowhere. The whole planet is a target range. Nice one Chibnall!! Ryan goes gun crazy . Hide behind the pillars! Use an EMP!! Nice. NOT!!



Doctor thing scolds mr Captain and help Miss number 2. Right to the centre! Let's climb down. Catastrophic event - should you stay around?



A planet for war development - really want to stay around? The captain is sacrificed. Tunnels are full of mad creatures!! And the planet in the night! Even the Doctor is not spared - why not the gender going wrong? Doctor and team kill creature.



The Doctor and team arrives at a null reward. The challenge is won? Fighting yet another ghost! Well the Doctor and 3 are around with the Doctor looks guilty as charged. Weak looking Doctor and the companions to comfort it.



Sonic the TARDIS and magic! In we go and into a repaired interior. Very liittle next time.



Poorly written and atrocious. 0.5/10

Chibnall is not the right showrunner!



Plot:



Starts of with Ryan and a special woman on Youtube?

You are looking incoherent.



So Ryan and his father will share adventure. Love he mixed couple.

Hate the tempter.



Ryan encounters tree and and alien life form.



2 women fighting about a scratch and police have to be called in? Pathetic.

And Policewoman complains about her job!



Yasmin Khan and Ryan Sinclair meets since Primary? Come one!



Mixed marriage , Ryan's stepdad and Grace

new yawn and the alien that hit Sheffield and the thing that fell to Earth.



The leaked madame seen. Scotsman?



You violated the Gallifrey / alien bit. Especially when you are an alien!



Last train .



Look for a doctor / yourself?!



Doctor / good friend. The result of overacting!



Doctor missing TARDIS and definitely not himself in a big way!



Exciting then worrying . Writing pathetic!



Alien objective moved. Why?



Doctor as Whittaker makes Colin Baker like like a genius in the fainting scene.



Fails at the Tennant in bed recovering scene.



Doctor still healing? Chibnall you really fail!



Doctor discovers DNA bomb and trying to resolve? Terrible!



Alien now hatched and a human is killed.

Doctor chases alien and explosions and Graham is last to follow line.

Get a new line!

Ryan describes incident. Oh my!



I forgot who I am overdone! I should be able to build something.



Ryan faults himself and Jas and Ryan believes this woman thing is an alien.

Nothing creative.

Doctor Who is dying with Chibnall in charge when the Doctor looks clueless.

And that sonic device looks like an X-rated prop.



Video recording and the thief is recording.

Hate the description of the Sonic Screwdrive. Bad start!

Alien war with Sheffield as a batlleground. Whatever!

So get them out of Earth range. Sontarans and Rutons come to mind.

Weaponised biotech. All right one for Chibnall.



Finally see a toothy alien? Yawn!



Alien so cold you can kill a human.



Alien hunt still on.



Construction site new battle scene.



I got a plan when I get there. Please! Enough of the old hat!



The Doctor needing someone to work a crane? I thought The Dcotor knew how?!



Jump and fight. Longer legs needed? More brains please.



The Doctor thing has the alien recall circuit. Bargain chip time.



Speech making? Poor scripting. Nannystating!!



Clever Doctor plants everything backs. Ryan's nan Grace

dies killing a weaponised creatures.



Ryan back on the bike.



Ryna's dad not reliable. Fear Her comes to mind.



Graham 3 years with Grace and he looks weak!



Doctor lost his family a long time ago.

Chibnall you really have no vision for anything!



Women's clothe line and costume no!! Earrings TARDIS MIA ...



And 4 of them at the end are beamed into outer space missing the TARDIS

target. The TARDIS does not want a faux Doctor.



Chibnall fail!



Pathetic!! Chibnall must move on! Lousy everything, plot, premise, ideas ...



Whittaker looks like a bumbling fool.



Bradley Walsh as Graham , no spine! It is time to clean house!

Just glimpses of upcoming stars. Chibnall and Whittaker out now!

You do not deserve to be renewed in 2019!

Go back to the regeneration scene

and correct the error from Twice Upon A time. 1/10